loved
By loved, 14 February, 2011
loved

loved

14 years 2 months ago

read it
but perhaps it was twilight ,
the darkness beside
did my view hide
but still in dreams
have a ride
and say
i tried

mand

mand

14 years 2 months ago

I love the appreciation and kindness of this poem. You are such a nice person.

Love Mand xxxxx

K

Who would curse you, only an ego would think they're important enough to be cursed. lol.

I like this poem but the second line would read better this way, I think:

If as much as one appreciates
a title, a word, a sentence
you have appreciated the poet (er I mean poem...but isn't poet what you really meant?) ;-)

~A

loved

you are more mature ,
than your age

i am sufferring from the

CANCER OF MY EGO

I thought you knew it.

Thanks the correction has been made.
Makes a better read now.
Though i will research
and replace the second time usuage of
appreciated

..........A poet feels elated,
If as much as one appreciates
a title, a word, a sentence
You have appreciated the whole poem..........

This was an on the spot poem ,
as a comment on some ones appreciation
of my other poem .
which one i can't trace .

A poet feels elated,
If as much as one appreciates
a title, a word, a sentence
You have appreciated the whole poem.
It’s been worth my while,

My deafness brings,
Now no fears,
My failing eye-sight
A self projection,
Now brings no tears.

You have fanned my ego
Friend
I wish I could come
and
hold your hand.

Thanks once again,
For once in a while,
I write poetry,
Which is not,
My usual style