thanks. I haven't been around much for a couple of months (on Neopoet). I ran out of anything to say.
still not sure if I can come up with anything worth saying, let alone saying it well...but I suppose I'll keep returning and hope. (though I do like this little piece a lot ). Your input is always very encouraging. thanks again
he molts poems
he molts poems
she understands
why
~A
yes! slough the slight ones,
yes! slough the slight ones, and hopefully, a new batch will sprout with more vigor, vitality, and heart!
Brittle
This is excellent, so much packed into so litte, with so much feeling.
"a'top" needs no apostraphe
But who cares; this is wonderful.
Jim
thanks. I haven't been around much for a couple of months (on Neopoet). I ran out of anything to say.
still not sure if I can come up with anything worth saying, let alone saying it well...but I suppose I'll keep returning and hope. (though I do like this little piece a lot ). Your input is always very encouraging. thanks again