brittle light
By brittle light, 19 March, 2011
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Wow I can see the whole picture and wish we could put pictures up here with our words..it is so nice. The only suggest is to fix your yellow in your first line, other then that I liked it very much,,, summy days ..that yellow haze

Loved this part the best:

I meditate on yellow
bathe in a buttercup's haze
become a sunflower
I "think" yellow
...on these awful gray days

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Good job

Mona

brittle light

sorry for the late reply...I have quiet days sometimes...corresponding becomes too challenging
anyway, Im glad you enjoyed this piece

brittle light

thank you for your many visits... sorry I'm not a better host...I always appreciate your thoughts

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the color yellow
has landed on nothing today
so I conjure it
by way of reverie and praise
a daze
of sunny disposition
girls in summer dresses
chatting of lovely things
in the light of Monet
I meditate on yellow
bathe in buttercups' haze
become a sunflower
on these awful gray days