If we sub title each state,
Love being the first part
then Loss and so on.
Could you edit the title it needs another "S" to be more Passion lol.
You have a lovely day out there and listen to the bird songs there for me and touch the humming birds with the mind.
Save a space for me in your memories it is how we live for ever here on this Earth plain, Yours Ian xx
Song of Passion
We must learn to sing
Teach us of your ways of love
Show me the rapture
See how the passion rises
Shield me not from true loving (Ian.T)
Thanks Ian.
Lovely tanka, thanks for sharing it on my blog.
Barbara
If we sub title each state,
Love being the first part
then Loss and so on.
Could you edit the title it needs another "S" to be more Passion lol.
You have a lovely day out there and listen to the bird songs there for me and touch the humming birds with the mind.
Save a space for me in your memories it is how we live for ever here on this Earth plain, Yours Ian xx
Ian.
Thanks I didn't realized.